Unemployment
Another significant reason for fall of the Roman Empire was unemployment. Soon enough, slave owners were making more money, while other people who worked lost money. Farmers lost products and service and were forced to sell their land. Then the Roman emperors lost money themselves. Since everybody was so poor, the emperor had to feed grain to citizens because they couldn't even feed themselves.
Riley Martinez
Period 6
1 November 2014
Mooney/ History
Another significant reason for fall of the Roman Empire was unemployment. Soon enough, slave owners were making more money, while other people who worked lost money. Farmers lost products and service and were forced to sell their land. Then the Roman emperors lost money themselves. Since everybody was so poor, the emperor had to feed grain to citizens because they couldn't even feed themselves.

Good paragraph, but you could improve it by explaining the reason why the slave owners got more money.
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